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susanstinson ([personal profile] susanstinson) wrote2006-07-26 09:10 am

Peaches in July

Praise for the fat old ladies.
Praise our bristles.
Praise our groaning in the morning
as we negotiate our nightgowns,
appliances and pills.

Praise the unquenchable carnality
of our coughs, full of moist depths,
and the way our mouths hang open
and our faces converge in gatherings
of ineffectual concentration
as we give another round of dominoes
our (impure? because, after all,
competititive and human) best thoughts.

We lose, of course, but play again.
The nightgown tears on the seam above the breast,
but we wear it, still, unmended,
while young women make big curls
in their hair with juice cans,
the results glossy and time-consuming,
as if the war were never over and
victory gardens were all lucky girls might sow.



Lake Buchanan, TX 2006

oh, oops

[identity profile] maeve66.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 01:53 pm (UTC)(link)
That was me... I didn't mean to post anonymously. Remember, I'm STARTING my LJ day; still not entirely up to speed, on the internet or in real life.

Re: oh, oops

[identity profile] susanstinson.livejournal.com 2006-07-26 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
And pleasing maeve66? even better...